Dear Jason Derulo (sing name)
I had some comments about your song "In my head".
Firstly why do you sing your own name at the start of the song. Is this so when it's played you know it is your song? It's not really important I just think it is odd.
My main comment is related to the words:
Everybodys looking for love. Oh. Oh.
Aint that the reason youre at this club. Oh. Oh.
I just wanted to mention that most girls go to clubs to have a laugh with their friends, a few drinks and a dance. Probably a large percentage have lovely men at home waiting for them.
Just stay with me now. Say the word and well go.
So you expect a girl you meet in a club to go home with you straight away. She might be looking for love but you're just looking for a one night stand.
Instead of talking let me demonstrate. Yeah.
Get down to business lets skip foreplay.
Lucky girl, you're not interested in talking or fore play, it's all about you isn't it Jason.
In my head, I see you all over me.
In my head, you fulfill my fantasy.
Further evidence of your selfish approach to sex.
Youll be screaming no.
Think about it Jason!
You'll see a side of love you've never known.
You think this is love, clearly you have no idea. Love is when you have a relationship, like getting to know the girl. Her name would be a start. Thinking of her needs as well as yours. Learning about what she likes and fulfilling her fantasies. What you are describing is lust, sex, booty call not love.
That said I'm sure with your sucessful music career you will have no trouble finding somebody to fulfill your fantasy!
Just thought I'd mention it!
Mrs Midnite
xx
Muse
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